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It had been some time since Phaedra had traveled to Laconia. Of late, her duties as Lieutenant of the women archers of Molossia had kept her particularly busy. Rumors of conflicts in the north seemed ever-present and Phaedra had to be certain that her soldiers were up to the challenges in front of them. She was determined that her soldiers would be prepared, it would be unacceptable for them to suffer the kinds of losses they had during the war with the Egyptians. Even though years had passed since then, there were some things one could never forget.
In fact, it was precisely because of that war that Phaedra had made her way to Laconia to help an old friend with teaching his daughter the art of war. Phaedra wasn’t entirely thrilled about having to give this girl personal lessons when she had other more important responsibilities, but she owed Leander her life. Phaedra wasn’t one to forget her debts, so she couldn’t begrudge the soldier the simple favor of lessons. It was but a small price to pay for everything he had done for her.
Phaedra arrived at the man’s house and he showed her out to a field, already set up for archery practice. Phaedra raised an eyebrow at him. If he was already training his daughter, she wasn’t entirely sure what he had dragged her all the way out here for. Though even if he did know archery, Leander was no archer himself, so perhaps he wanted an expert’s eye to reinforce his daughter’s training.
His daughter was already out waiting for them with her bow and arrow. She seemed so young, even younger than the 16-year-olds that she often had to deal with. How old had Leander said she was again? Not old enough to join up yet anyway. She could understand his impulse to make sure she was well trained beforehand. She so often got girls who had little or no training when they first joined up. When they were still young and quick to learn she would give them a chance, but they were at a distinct disadvantage to those girls who had at least some basic experience, usually with hunting.
Phaedra wasn’t much for small talk, especially with children. Instead, Phaedra was quite brusque, jumping immediately into the same attitude she would take with any new recruit. “Adelpha, I’m Lieutenant Phaedra of Molossia. You can address me as Lieutenant or Ma’am.” Phaedra didn’t wait for an acknowledgment of her introduction. “Now string your bow and start shooting at the target so I can see what I’m working with.”
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It had been some time since Phaedra had traveled to Laconia. Of late, her duties as Lieutenant of the women archers of Molossia had kept her particularly busy. Rumors of conflicts in the north seemed ever-present and Phaedra had to be certain that her soldiers were up to the challenges in front of them. She was determined that her soldiers would be prepared, it would be unacceptable for them to suffer the kinds of losses they had during the war with the Egyptians. Even though years had passed since then, there were some things one could never forget.
In fact, it was precisely because of that war that Phaedra had made her way to Laconia to help an old friend with teaching his daughter the art of war. Phaedra wasn’t entirely thrilled about having to give this girl personal lessons when she had other more important responsibilities, but she owed Leander her life. Phaedra wasn’t one to forget her debts, so she couldn’t begrudge the soldier the simple favor of lessons. It was but a small price to pay for everything he had done for her.
Phaedra arrived at the man’s house and he showed her out to a field, already set up for archery practice. Phaedra raised an eyebrow at him. If he was already training his daughter, she wasn’t entirely sure what he had dragged her all the way out here for. Though even if he did know archery, Leander was no archer himself, so perhaps he wanted an expert’s eye to reinforce his daughter’s training.
His daughter was already out waiting for them with her bow and arrow. She seemed so young, even younger than the 16-year-olds that she often had to deal with. How old had Leander said she was again? Not old enough to join up yet anyway. She could understand his impulse to make sure she was well trained beforehand. She so often got girls who had little or no training when they first joined up. When they were still young and quick to learn she would give them a chance, but they were at a distinct disadvantage to those girls who had at least some basic experience, usually with hunting.
Phaedra wasn’t much for small talk, especially with children. Instead, Phaedra was quite brusque, jumping immediately into the same attitude she would take with any new recruit. “Adelpha, I’m Lieutenant Phaedra of Molossia. You can address me as Lieutenant or Ma’am.” Phaedra didn’t wait for an acknowledgment of her introduction. “Now string your bow and start shooting at the target so I can see what I’m working with.”
It had been some time since Phaedra had traveled to Laconia. Of late, her duties as Lieutenant of the women archers of Molossia had kept her particularly busy. Rumors of conflicts in the north seemed ever-present and Phaedra had to be certain that her soldiers were up to the challenges in front of them. She was determined that her soldiers would be prepared, it would be unacceptable for them to suffer the kinds of losses they had during the war with the Egyptians. Even though years had passed since then, there were some things one could never forget.
In fact, it was precisely because of that war that Phaedra had made her way to Laconia to help an old friend with teaching his daughter the art of war. Phaedra wasn’t entirely thrilled about having to give this girl personal lessons when she had other more important responsibilities, but she owed Leander her life. Phaedra wasn’t one to forget her debts, so she couldn’t begrudge the soldier the simple favor of lessons. It was but a small price to pay for everything he had done for her.
Phaedra arrived at the man’s house and he showed her out to a field, already set up for archery practice. Phaedra raised an eyebrow at him. If he was already training his daughter, she wasn’t entirely sure what he had dragged her all the way out here for. Though even if he did know archery, Leander was no archer himself, so perhaps he wanted an expert’s eye to reinforce his daughter’s training.
His daughter was already out waiting for them with her bow and arrow. She seemed so young, even younger than the 16-year-olds that she often had to deal with. How old had Leander said she was again? Not old enough to join up yet anyway. She could understand his impulse to make sure she was well trained beforehand. She so often got girls who had little or no training when they first joined up. When they were still young and quick to learn she would give them a chance, but they were at a distinct disadvantage to those girls who had at least some basic experience, usually with hunting.
Phaedra wasn’t much for small talk, especially with children. Instead, Phaedra was quite brusque, jumping immediately into the same attitude she would take with any new recruit. “Adelpha, I’m Lieutenant Phaedra of Molossia. You can address me as Lieutenant or Ma’am.” Phaedra didn’t wait for an acknowledgment of her introduction. “Now string your bow and start shooting at the target so I can see what I’m working with.”
"But Father, does it have to be today? I had plans..." Adelpha and her parents stood in the living room, having yet another argument that was starting to be routine.
"Not another word. You will do as you are told."
"Go easy on her, Leander. She's just a ch--"
"You've coddled her long enough! It's about time that she grows up and prepares for the battles ahead! The sooner she learns, the better. Now go outside to the field Adelpha or so help me, I will burn every brush, paint and canvas in the house."
Adelpha was crushed. Her Father was never the type to make idle threats and now he was threatening to destroy the only thing that she ever really loved to do. "Yes, Father..." Without another word she turned on her heel in an almost military fashion and exited the house.
A short while later, as she was braiding together some strands of grass, Phaedra approached and introduced herself. Adelpha got to her feet part way through the instruction and then grabbed her bow. She set one end on the ground just behind her leg, help onto the other end with her hand and bent it downwards, using her other hand to hook the string. That was always the easy part. The next was atgempting to hit the target. Taking hold of an arrow from the pile, she cocked it on the string. With her elbow bent upwards, she pulled on the string, aiming with one eye shut and then released.
The arrow flew through the air, yet missed the target, instead going passed the top of it.
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"But Father, does it have to be today? I had plans..." Adelpha and her parents stood in the living room, having yet another argument that was starting to be routine.
"Not another word. You will do as you are told."
"Go easy on her, Leander. She's just a ch--"
"You've coddled her long enough! It's about time that she grows up and prepares for the battles ahead! The sooner she learns, the better. Now go outside to the field Adelpha or so help me, I will burn every brush, paint and canvas in the house."
Adelpha was crushed. Her Father was never the type to make idle threats and now he was threatening to destroy the only thing that she ever really loved to do. "Yes, Father..." Without another word she turned on her heel in an almost military fashion and exited the house.
A short while later, as she was braiding together some strands of grass, Phaedra approached and introduced herself. Adelpha got to her feet part way through the instruction and then grabbed her bow. She set one end on the ground just behind her leg, help onto the other end with her hand and bent it downwards, using her other hand to hook the string. That was always the easy part. The next was atgempting to hit the target. Taking hold of an arrow from the pile, she cocked it on the string. With her elbow bent upwards, she pulled on the string, aiming with one eye shut and then released.
The arrow flew through the air, yet missed the target, instead going passed the top of it.
"But Father, does it have to be today? I had plans..." Adelpha and her parents stood in the living room, having yet another argument that was starting to be routine.
"Not another word. You will do as you are told."
"Go easy on her, Leander. She's just a ch--"
"You've coddled her long enough! It's about time that she grows up and prepares for the battles ahead! The sooner she learns, the better. Now go outside to the field Adelpha or so help me, I will burn every brush, paint and canvas in the house."
Adelpha was crushed. Her Father was never the type to make idle threats and now he was threatening to destroy the only thing that she ever really loved to do. "Yes, Father..." Without another word she turned on her heel in an almost military fashion and exited the house.
A short while later, as she was braiding together some strands of grass, Phaedra approached and introduced herself. Adelpha got to her feet part way through the instruction and then grabbed her bow. She set one end on the ground just behind her leg, help onto the other end with her hand and bent it downwards, using her other hand to hook the string. That was always the easy part. The next was atgempting to hit the target. Taking hold of an arrow from the pile, she cocked it on the string. With her elbow bent upwards, she pulled on the string, aiming with one eye shut and then released.
The arrow flew through the air, yet missed the target, instead going passed the top of it.
Phaedra watched, not making any comments as the girl followed her commands. That she listened was good. She wasn’t sure if this was unusual in a girl of this age or not, but she took it as a good sign. She found it hard enough to determine if the girls joining up were 16 or not, she had never been a good judge of age, so she took whatever they told her at face value. This girl looked younger than them, but of what age she couldn’t tell.
The girl knew how to string a bow, that was good. She noted this without her expression changing instead her face unreadable, analyzing this girl’s flaws in technique. Boy there were a lot of them. The stringing of the bow was the highlight of her performance. The girl closed one eye to aim, a rookie mistake. Her form was all wrong. Still, she needed to see what she was working with first.
“Again,” she commanded, trying to see what was a matter of skill, what was a matter of strength, and what was simply a matter of nerves. Phaedra had the girl fire a few more arrows uninstructed before stopping her. “Go, collect the arrows. You need to work on your form.” Phaedra said simply.
“You need to keep both eyes on your target. You’ll be able to see better that way. Keeping one eye closed just means you have one fewer eye to see out of.” It also meant you had less of a good view of what might be sneaking up on you in a battle, but that hardly seemed relevant to teaching a young girl how to hit a target, so she left that part out for the moment. “You also want to draw the bow straight back, elbow level.” There were more corrections Phaedra could have given, but she knew from experience it was best to try to correct one thing at a time, especially with the young ones. Give them too much to remember, and the whole thing would fall apart. “Now, try it again.”
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Phaedra watched, not making any comments as the girl followed her commands. That she listened was good. She wasn’t sure if this was unusual in a girl of this age or not, but she took it as a good sign. She found it hard enough to determine if the girls joining up were 16 or not, she had never been a good judge of age, so she took whatever they told her at face value. This girl looked younger than them, but of what age she couldn’t tell.
The girl knew how to string a bow, that was good. She noted this without her expression changing instead her face unreadable, analyzing this girl’s flaws in technique. Boy there were a lot of them. The stringing of the bow was the highlight of her performance. The girl closed one eye to aim, a rookie mistake. Her form was all wrong. Still, she needed to see what she was working with first.
“Again,” she commanded, trying to see what was a matter of skill, what was a matter of strength, and what was simply a matter of nerves. Phaedra had the girl fire a few more arrows uninstructed before stopping her. “Go, collect the arrows. You need to work on your form.” Phaedra said simply.
“You need to keep both eyes on your target. You’ll be able to see better that way. Keeping one eye closed just means you have one fewer eye to see out of.” It also meant you had less of a good view of what might be sneaking up on you in a battle, but that hardly seemed relevant to teaching a young girl how to hit a target, so she left that part out for the moment. “You also want to draw the bow straight back, elbow level.” There were more corrections Phaedra could have given, but she knew from experience it was best to try to correct one thing at a time, especially with the young ones. Give them too much to remember, and the whole thing would fall apart. “Now, try it again.”
Phaedra watched, not making any comments as the girl followed her commands. That she listened was good. She wasn’t sure if this was unusual in a girl of this age or not, but she took it as a good sign. She found it hard enough to determine if the girls joining up were 16 or not, she had never been a good judge of age, so she took whatever they told her at face value. This girl looked younger than them, but of what age she couldn’t tell.
The girl knew how to string a bow, that was good. She noted this without her expression changing instead her face unreadable, analyzing this girl’s flaws in technique. Boy there were a lot of them. The stringing of the bow was the highlight of her performance. The girl closed one eye to aim, a rookie mistake. Her form was all wrong. Still, she needed to see what she was working with first.
“Again,” she commanded, trying to see what was a matter of skill, what was a matter of strength, and what was simply a matter of nerves. Phaedra had the girl fire a few more arrows uninstructed before stopping her. “Go, collect the arrows. You need to work on your form.” Phaedra said simply.
“You need to keep both eyes on your target. You’ll be able to see better that way. Keeping one eye closed just means you have one fewer eye to see out of.” It also meant you had less of a good view of what might be sneaking up on you in a battle, but that hardly seemed relevant to teaching a young girl how to hit a target, so she left that part out for the moment. “You also want to draw the bow straight back, elbow level.” There were more corrections Phaedra could have given, but she knew from experience it was best to try to correct one thing at a time, especially with the young ones. Give them too much to remember, and the whole thing would fall apart. “Now, try it again.”
Adelpha knew that she'd get it all wrong. Being under the constant criticism of her Father led her to constantly doubt herself when it came to anything that he felt was important.
"Yes, Ma'am." That was all that she could muster before walking up to nearby the target and collecting all of the arrows that she could find. One had gone missing, to which Adelpha stared after it for a moment while chewing her bottom lip.
Not seeing it, she returned with what she did have and began cocking the arrows on the string, one at a time and releasing them in the same manner as before.
That is until Phaedra gave her more instructions.
Adelpha pursed her lips, pulling the cocked arrow back with her elbow raised at first, but then dropping it down. She checked on her arm, looking back to see if it was level before she released the arrow a touch earlier than expected. The string grazed her cheek, yet the arrow flew true, landing on the outer edge of the target. She felt her cheek burn, yet didn't make a move to check on it. Instead she merely chided herself before cocking up another arrow. This time she didn't look to see if her elbow was down, instead trying to rely on her muscle memory. "How many girls that you've trained have ever returned from the wars?" As far as she could tell, the most inexperienced and vulnerable were the ones that died first, which didn't offer her any hope for her future. Once more she released the arrow, this time being sure not to hurt herself.
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Adelpha knew that she'd get it all wrong. Being under the constant criticism of her Father led her to constantly doubt herself when it came to anything that he felt was important.
"Yes, Ma'am." That was all that she could muster before walking up to nearby the target and collecting all of the arrows that she could find. One had gone missing, to which Adelpha stared after it for a moment while chewing her bottom lip.
Not seeing it, she returned with what she did have and began cocking the arrows on the string, one at a time and releasing them in the same manner as before.
That is until Phaedra gave her more instructions.
Adelpha pursed her lips, pulling the cocked arrow back with her elbow raised at first, but then dropping it down. She checked on her arm, looking back to see if it was level before she released the arrow a touch earlier than expected. The string grazed her cheek, yet the arrow flew true, landing on the outer edge of the target. She felt her cheek burn, yet didn't make a move to check on it. Instead she merely chided herself before cocking up another arrow. This time she didn't look to see if her elbow was down, instead trying to rely on her muscle memory. "How many girls that you've trained have ever returned from the wars?" As far as she could tell, the most inexperienced and vulnerable were the ones that died first, which didn't offer her any hope for her future. Once more she released the arrow, this time being sure not to hurt herself.
Adelpha knew that she'd get it all wrong. Being under the constant criticism of her Father led her to constantly doubt herself when it came to anything that he felt was important.
"Yes, Ma'am." That was all that she could muster before walking up to nearby the target and collecting all of the arrows that she could find. One had gone missing, to which Adelpha stared after it for a moment while chewing her bottom lip.
Not seeing it, she returned with what she did have and began cocking the arrows on the string, one at a time and releasing them in the same manner as before.
That is until Phaedra gave her more instructions.
Adelpha pursed her lips, pulling the cocked arrow back with her elbow raised at first, but then dropping it down. She checked on her arm, looking back to see if it was level before she released the arrow a touch earlier than expected. The string grazed her cheek, yet the arrow flew true, landing on the outer edge of the target. She felt her cheek burn, yet didn't make a move to check on it. Instead she merely chided herself before cocking up another arrow. This time she didn't look to see if her elbow was down, instead trying to rely on her muscle memory. "How many girls that you've trained have ever returned from the wars?" As far as she could tell, the most inexperienced and vulnerable were the ones that died first, which didn't offer her any hope for her future. Once more she released the arrow, this time being sure not to hurt herself.
The girl was quick to respond to instruction. Good. There were so many young women who were quick to say that they were listening to what she had taught, but when it came to implementing her instructions, they acted as if they hadn’t heard. Some she was sure listened to what she said but lacked the ability to implement it. Others didn’t pay attention to when she spoke at all. This girl had neither of those problems and seemed to be adjusting adequately.
There were still a few minor changes she could make. The bowstring caught the girl in the face, but she didn’t seem bothered by it, Phaedra noted with approval. She just moved on to continue her training with the target. That was a minor error that could be fixed. Already her aim was starting to improve.
When the girl paused to ask a question, Phaedra was surprised at the topic she had chosen. She opened her mouth to answer and then closed it again, taking the time to pick her words carefully. It wasn’t a subject she spoke on that much. Aside from that, it was such a strange way to word the question. It was easier for her to count those who had been lost at war than to count the number of people who returned. Still, it wasn’t a pleasant subject, and not one she would have expected from a child this young.
“Most of my soldiers have returned. There have been so many though, I’m not sure I could give you an accurate count.” She paused for a moment longer, frowning, puzzled by the question. Normally she wouldn’t have asked, she didn’t have the slightest idea how to talk to a child and she didn’t expect she would see this girl after today. She didn’t seem too enthusiastic about learning archery. But Phaedra couldn’t help but be curious about where the question came from. “Why do you ask?”
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The girl was quick to respond to instruction. Good. There were so many young women who were quick to say that they were listening to what she had taught, but when it came to implementing her instructions, they acted as if they hadn’t heard. Some she was sure listened to what she said but lacked the ability to implement it. Others didn’t pay attention to when she spoke at all. This girl had neither of those problems and seemed to be adjusting adequately.
There were still a few minor changes she could make. The bowstring caught the girl in the face, but she didn’t seem bothered by it, Phaedra noted with approval. She just moved on to continue her training with the target. That was a minor error that could be fixed. Already her aim was starting to improve.
When the girl paused to ask a question, Phaedra was surprised at the topic she had chosen. She opened her mouth to answer and then closed it again, taking the time to pick her words carefully. It wasn’t a subject she spoke on that much. Aside from that, it was such a strange way to word the question. It was easier for her to count those who had been lost at war than to count the number of people who returned. Still, it wasn’t a pleasant subject, and not one she would have expected from a child this young.
“Most of my soldiers have returned. There have been so many though, I’m not sure I could give you an accurate count.” She paused for a moment longer, frowning, puzzled by the question. Normally she wouldn’t have asked, she didn’t have the slightest idea how to talk to a child and she didn’t expect she would see this girl after today. She didn’t seem too enthusiastic about learning archery. But Phaedra couldn’t help but be curious about where the question came from. “Why do you ask?”
The girl was quick to respond to instruction. Good. There were so many young women who were quick to say that they were listening to what she had taught, but when it came to implementing her instructions, they acted as if they hadn’t heard. Some she was sure listened to what she said but lacked the ability to implement it. Others didn’t pay attention to when she spoke at all. This girl had neither of those problems and seemed to be adjusting adequately.
There were still a few minor changes she could make. The bowstring caught the girl in the face, but she didn’t seem bothered by it, Phaedra noted with approval. She just moved on to continue her training with the target. That was a minor error that could be fixed. Already her aim was starting to improve.
When the girl paused to ask a question, Phaedra was surprised at the topic she had chosen. She opened her mouth to answer and then closed it again, taking the time to pick her words carefully. It wasn’t a subject she spoke on that much. Aside from that, it was such a strange way to word the question. It was easier for her to count those who had been lost at war than to count the number of people who returned. Still, it wasn’t a pleasant subject, and not one she would have expected from a child this young.
“Most of my soldiers have returned. There have been so many though, I’m not sure I could give you an accurate count.” She paused for a moment longer, frowning, puzzled by the question. Normally she wouldn’t have asked, she didn’t have the slightest idea how to talk to a child and she didn’t expect she would see this girl after today. She didn’t seem too enthusiastic about learning archery. But Phaedra couldn’t help but be curious about where the question came from. “Why do you ask?”
For a moment Adelpha thought that she had done wrong. Phaedra's momentary silence spoke volumes to her. Or at last that was what she had imagined. She could already hear her Father in her ear chiding her for even asking questions at all that had nothing to do with the task at hand. He'd always tell her to just do as she was told and to speak only when spoken to.
But of course Adelpha had to ask. Every young person that knew that they'd be sent off to war had always wondered how many would return. They'd often see the ones that do return, some missing parts of their bodies, some missing parts of their minds. Yet there were some of course that came back with a bounce in their step as they were the type that thrived on battle. And then there were those that didn't come back at all....
"If most return, then that shows how good of a trainer you are." Again she wondered if she spoke out of turn and so she went right back to cocking her bow firing off another arrow, hitting the same part of the target's ring as before, but on the opposite side. "I was just curious. That's all. My Father will surely want to hear of my prospects. I hope that I do well enough to have you give him a good report."
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For a moment Adelpha thought that she had done wrong. Phaedra's momentary silence spoke volumes to her. Or at last that was what she had imagined. She could already hear her Father in her ear chiding her for even asking questions at all that had nothing to do with the task at hand. He'd always tell her to just do as she was told and to speak only when spoken to.
But of course Adelpha had to ask. Every young person that knew that they'd be sent off to war had always wondered how many would return. They'd often see the ones that do return, some missing parts of their bodies, some missing parts of their minds. Yet there were some of course that came back with a bounce in their step as they were the type that thrived on battle. And then there were those that didn't come back at all....
"If most return, then that shows how good of a trainer you are." Again she wondered if she spoke out of turn and so she went right back to cocking her bow firing off another arrow, hitting the same part of the target's ring as before, but on the opposite side. "I was just curious. That's all. My Father will surely want to hear of my prospects. I hope that I do well enough to have you give him a good report."
For a moment Adelpha thought that she had done wrong. Phaedra's momentary silence spoke volumes to her. Or at last that was what she had imagined. She could already hear her Father in her ear chiding her for even asking questions at all that had nothing to do with the task at hand. He'd always tell her to just do as she was told and to speak only when spoken to.
But of course Adelpha had to ask. Every young person that knew that they'd be sent off to war had always wondered how many would return. They'd often see the ones that do return, some missing parts of their bodies, some missing parts of their minds. Yet there were some of course that came back with a bounce in their step as they were the type that thrived on battle. And then there were those that didn't come back at all....
"If most return, then that shows how good of a trainer you are." Again she wondered if she spoke out of turn and so she went right back to cocking her bow firing off another arrow, hitting the same part of the target's ring as before, but on the opposite side. "I was just curious. That's all. My Father will surely want to hear of my prospects. I hope that I do well enough to have you give him a good report."
Phaedra’s expression eased into what might be called a smile if you looked closely when her military record was complemented. As the girl went back to shooting her bow and arrow, Phaedra watched her form to see if she could give any corrections to better her shooting. So far she had seemed to take instruction well. This time she only shot one arrow before turning to her and speaking again. Clearly a continuation of their conversation. “I’ll give him a good report if you do well at your archery. I will not sugar coat your performance to please your father. That would do neither of you any favors,” Phaedra answered the girl. She was never easy on her soldiers, and she wasn’t going to start now even if this girl was younger than most women she taught.
The girl was still stopping to chatter on instead of focusing on the task at hand. That alone would not help her aim. “Perhaps if you focused on your shooting instead of asking questions you’d do a better job.” Mental focus was something that many people disregarded when it came to teaching archery. For Phaedra, it was one of the most important skills she taught. To be able to clear one’s mind and focus only on the target even when the battle was raging around you, that was how you became a successful archer.
“Before you shoot. Take a breath. Hold it until you release. Think of nothing else but your arrow hitting your target,” she instructed the girl. It wasn’t an easy skill to master, but at the very least, the girl could start practicing. She wasn’t even entirely sure how possible it was for a girl of her age to achieve such focus. All of the children she’d ever met seemed to have very short attention spans. It was not something that endeared her to them.
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Phaedra’s expression eased into what might be called a smile if you looked closely when her military record was complemented. As the girl went back to shooting her bow and arrow, Phaedra watched her form to see if she could give any corrections to better her shooting. So far she had seemed to take instruction well. This time she only shot one arrow before turning to her and speaking again. Clearly a continuation of their conversation. “I’ll give him a good report if you do well at your archery. I will not sugar coat your performance to please your father. That would do neither of you any favors,” Phaedra answered the girl. She was never easy on her soldiers, and she wasn’t going to start now even if this girl was younger than most women she taught.
The girl was still stopping to chatter on instead of focusing on the task at hand. That alone would not help her aim. “Perhaps if you focused on your shooting instead of asking questions you’d do a better job.” Mental focus was something that many people disregarded when it came to teaching archery. For Phaedra, it was one of the most important skills she taught. To be able to clear one’s mind and focus only on the target even when the battle was raging around you, that was how you became a successful archer.
“Before you shoot. Take a breath. Hold it until you release. Think of nothing else but your arrow hitting your target,” she instructed the girl. It wasn’t an easy skill to master, but at the very least, the girl could start practicing. She wasn’t even entirely sure how possible it was for a girl of her age to achieve such focus. All of the children she’d ever met seemed to have very short attention spans. It was not something that endeared her to them.
Phaedra’s expression eased into what might be called a smile if you looked closely when her military record was complemented. As the girl went back to shooting her bow and arrow, Phaedra watched her form to see if she could give any corrections to better her shooting. So far she had seemed to take instruction well. This time she only shot one arrow before turning to her and speaking again. Clearly a continuation of their conversation. “I’ll give him a good report if you do well at your archery. I will not sugar coat your performance to please your father. That would do neither of you any favors,” Phaedra answered the girl. She was never easy on her soldiers, and she wasn’t going to start now even if this girl was younger than most women she taught.
The girl was still stopping to chatter on instead of focusing on the task at hand. That alone would not help her aim. “Perhaps if you focused on your shooting instead of asking questions you’d do a better job.” Mental focus was something that many people disregarded when it came to teaching archery. For Phaedra, it was one of the most important skills she taught. To be able to clear one’s mind and focus only on the target even when the battle was raging around you, that was how you became a successful archer.
“Before you shoot. Take a breath. Hold it until you release. Think of nothing else but your arrow hitting your target,” she instructed the girl. It wasn’t an easy skill to master, but at the very least, the girl could start practicing. She wasn’t even entirely sure how possible it was for a girl of her age to achieve such focus. All of the children she’d ever met seemed to have very short attention spans. It was not something that endeared her to them.