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A clarion clear voice, it carries straight and true from the entrance to the stables to their sole occupant, Amiti of Tzephania. The silhouette blacked out by the dim morning light at its back gives a polite half-bow, half-curtsy. She advances, hair waving beneath her shawl and her best robes hanging heavy over her frame. As she draws nearer the stable's soft, muddy illumination gives definition to the dimple furrowing her brows and her otherwise grave expression. There is the scuffle of an irritable donkey shifting in its stall, of dried grasses skittering down the sides of troughs and wooden gates. Her sandals stop two stalls shy of the senator, and she bows her head again.
'If it please you, pardon the intrusion. But I am Avishag of Gilit. You spoke with my husband yesterday.'
She can still feel Gilit staggering back into her, knocking his hip on their market stall and swearing viciously under his breath until she shouldered him into their wagon. She can still remember how old the grimace carving his face into fractures made him look. She can still recall how he massaged the aches in his hand, his thumb grinding his palm and working up to the pads beneath his fingers as he kneaded his knuckles.
It always began with cursing so-and-so, the senator this time, for a fool. Gilit had explained that the senator had called on him to restrain himself and his friends. Gilit had slammed his fist into the side of the wagon, and so quickly his fuming had collapsed into pleading with the heavens. The outer circle of ecclesiastic officials and clansmen would disdain the highest Jewish authorities whether or not men like him gave them a forum outside of bars in their cups or out in the wilderness in secret. If nothing else, by insisting with rigor on taming those resentments into concrete objections to the authorities' policies rooted in their traditions, their covenant with God, people like Gilit were doing the authorities a favor. He couldn't well help it if the authorities hated to hear true testaments to their flaws. He couldn't well help it if the authorities did not like to be compared to Jonah on the one hand or any of the parade of leaders that had "wed their sons and daughters to foreigners" on the other. Am I not respectful? he asked, with genuine agony.
'To the point of grovelling,' she recalled responding. 'But that doesn't inspire confidence.'
What anguished remorse poured out then. Gilit of Moshe ground his palm into his forehead and rocked in the back of the wagon. What am I to plead to a senator but that he is right? What am I to say but that I know there are those among my friends swept up in their enthusiasms and I try to weight them down with stones before they climb and fall from too high? How am I to order a senator about how to conduct his business to ease tensions?!
'Be honest! Did you not tell me how afraid you were of his anger because you respected him? But you cannot find courage in your heart to tell him what he needs to hear?'
It still darkens her eyes, the memory of how her husband trembled and denied it all. He may tell her she is an ignorant fool. He may tell her she understands nothing of politics. But she always could see how deeply it scarred a man like him to skirt the truth.
'You spoke to my husband yesterday. He would not be so forward as to send me as a messenger, but I wanted to testify about him on his behalf. If that is permissible. Senator?'
She lifts her chin and eyes Amiti. The morning stillness is so deafening all she can hear is the rush of her own blood in her veins. Nevertheless, there is no expression in the world the senator could turn on her then that would make her avert her eyes.
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'Excuse me, senator.'
A clarion clear voice, it carries straight and true from the entrance to the stables to their sole occupant, Amiti of Tzephania. The silhouette blacked out by the dim morning light at its back gives a polite half-bow, half-curtsy. She advances, hair waving beneath her shawl and her best robes hanging heavy over her frame. As she draws nearer the stable's soft, muddy illumination gives definition to the dimple furrowing her brows and her otherwise grave expression. There is the scuffle of an irritable donkey shifting in its stall, of dried grasses skittering down the sides of troughs and wooden gates. Her sandals stop two stalls shy of the senator, and she bows her head again.
'If it please you, pardon the intrusion. But I am Avishag of Gilit. You spoke with my husband yesterday.'
She can still feel Gilit staggering back into her, knocking his hip on their market stall and swearing viciously under his breath until she shouldered him into their wagon. She can still remember how old the grimace carving his face into fractures made him look. She can still recall how he massaged the aches in his hand, his thumb grinding his palm and working up to the pads beneath his fingers as he kneaded his knuckles.
It always began with cursing so-and-so, the senator this time, for a fool. Gilit had explained that the senator had called on him to restrain himself and his friends. Gilit had slammed his fist into the side of the wagon, and so quickly his fuming had collapsed into pleading with the heavens. The outer circle of ecclesiastic officials and clansmen would disdain the highest Jewish authorities whether or not men like him gave them a forum outside of bars in their cups or out in the wilderness in secret. If nothing else, by insisting with rigor on taming those resentments into concrete objections to the authorities' policies rooted in their traditions, their covenant with God, people like Gilit were doing the authorities a favor. He couldn't well help it if the authorities hated to hear true testaments to their flaws. He couldn't well help it if the authorities did not like to be compared to Jonah on the one hand or any of the parade of leaders that had "wed their sons and daughters to foreigners" on the other. Am I not respectful? he asked, with genuine agony.
'To the point of grovelling,' she recalled responding. 'But that doesn't inspire confidence.'
What anguished remorse poured out then. Gilit of Moshe ground his palm into his forehead and rocked in the back of the wagon. What am I to plead to a senator but that he is right? What am I to say but that I know there are those among my friends swept up in their enthusiasms and I try to weight them down with stones before they climb and fall from too high? How am I to order a senator about how to conduct his business to ease tensions?!
'Be honest! Did you not tell me how afraid you were of his anger because you respected him? But you cannot find courage in your heart to tell him what he needs to hear?'
It still darkens her eyes, the memory of how her husband trembled and denied it all. He may tell her she is an ignorant fool. He may tell her she understands nothing of politics. But she always could see how deeply it scarred a man like him to skirt the truth.
'You spoke to my husband yesterday. He would not be so forward as to send me as a messenger, but I wanted to testify about him on his behalf. If that is permissible. Senator?'
She lifts her chin and eyes Amiti. The morning stillness is so deafening all she can hear is the rush of her own blood in her veins. Nevertheless, there is no expression in the world the senator could turn on her then that would make her avert her eyes.
'Excuse me, senator.'
A clarion clear voice, it carries straight and true from the entrance to the stables to their sole occupant, Amiti of Tzephania. The silhouette blacked out by the dim morning light at its back gives a polite half-bow, half-curtsy. She advances, hair waving beneath her shawl and her best robes hanging heavy over her frame. As she draws nearer the stable's soft, muddy illumination gives definition to the dimple furrowing her brows and her otherwise grave expression. There is the scuffle of an irritable donkey shifting in its stall, of dried grasses skittering down the sides of troughs and wooden gates. Her sandals stop two stalls shy of the senator, and she bows her head again.
'If it please you, pardon the intrusion. But I am Avishag of Gilit. You spoke with my husband yesterday.'
She can still feel Gilit staggering back into her, knocking his hip on their market stall and swearing viciously under his breath until she shouldered him into their wagon. She can still remember how old the grimace carving his face into fractures made him look. She can still recall how he massaged the aches in his hand, his thumb grinding his palm and working up to the pads beneath his fingers as he kneaded his knuckles.
It always began with cursing so-and-so, the senator this time, for a fool. Gilit had explained that the senator had called on him to restrain himself and his friends. Gilit had slammed his fist into the side of the wagon, and so quickly his fuming had collapsed into pleading with the heavens. The outer circle of ecclesiastic officials and clansmen would disdain the highest Jewish authorities whether or not men like him gave them a forum outside of bars in their cups or out in the wilderness in secret. If nothing else, by insisting with rigor on taming those resentments into concrete objections to the authorities' policies rooted in their traditions, their covenant with God, people like Gilit were doing the authorities a favor. He couldn't well help it if the authorities hated to hear true testaments to their flaws. He couldn't well help it if the authorities did not like to be compared to Jonah on the one hand or any of the parade of leaders that had "wed their sons and daughters to foreigners" on the other. Am I not respectful? he asked, with genuine agony.
'To the point of grovelling,' she recalled responding. 'But that doesn't inspire confidence.'
What anguished remorse poured out then. Gilit of Moshe ground his palm into his forehead and rocked in the back of the wagon. What am I to plead to a senator but that he is right? What am I to say but that I know there are those among my friends swept up in their enthusiasms and I try to weight them down with stones before they climb and fall from too high? How am I to order a senator about how to conduct his business to ease tensions?!
'Be honest! Did you not tell me how afraid you were of his anger because you respected him? But you cannot find courage in your heart to tell him what he needs to hear?'
It still darkens her eyes, the memory of how her husband trembled and denied it all. He may tell her she is an ignorant fool. He may tell her she understands nothing of politics. But she always could see how deeply it scarred a man like him to skirt the truth.
'You spoke to my husband yesterday. He would not be so forward as to send me as a messenger, but I wanted to testify about him on his behalf. If that is permissible. Senator?'
She lifts her chin and eyes Amiti. The morning stillness is so deafening all she can hear is the rush of her own blood in her veins. Nevertheless, there is no expression in the world the senator could turn on her then that would make her avert her eyes.
In the mornings, before the sun blazed onto the horizon, when the world was calm and quiet was when Amiti liked to wake. He laid in his bed for just a moment, eyes glittering in the low gray light, and looked toward his window. Today was nothing in particular. There was nowhere pressing that he had to be, though of course he would go to the temple. Sitting up, he swung his legs out of bed and then lowered himself to his knees. He bowed his head and murmured his prayers, facing the direction of the temple in Jerusalem as he did it. Once done, he stood, washed his face and hands, and dressed for the day.
He took care with his nails, ensuring there was no dirt, that the lengths were even, and that his general appearance was above reproach. With careful, methodical strokes, he brushed his beard and his hair before checking himself one last time in the looking glass. None of this was vanity - at least, not in the sense that he found himself to be some sort of adonis for people to admire. No, he wanted to make sure that when judgemental glances were shot his way, he would be impenetrable.
The kitchen servant was awake and beginning the task of preparing food for the household, but it would not be ready for an hour or two yet. Usually he went to his study to read but this morning he was stopped and told that the servant responsible for taking care of the animals was ill. Being particular about the way his donkey was dealt with, Amiti elected to take care of the chore himself. He was not too good, after all, to do it.
This sort of thing kept a person humble.
He nodded to the servant who’d informed him of the ill man and thought for a moment. Though the son of Tzephaniah had faults enough, he was not a cruel man. The doctor would be summoned for the servant and he decided to be the one to do it, though, that meant he needed to go and see how bad the illness was. This would also tell him how contagious.
A brief look confirmed that the man did need a doctor but beyond that was out of Amiti’s scope of knowledge. The problem was that his donkey needed to be cared for first. Obviously he could dispense with brushing the coat for now, but not food and water. That task must be done.
He sighed to himself and then headed out to the stables. They were not the wealthiest men in the city but they certainly weren’t poor. In the stables outside his home, they were able to house and feed three donkies that had to be shared between the brothers and their father. Amiti had gone to the trouble to secure his own, which meant that if any of the other men in the house wanted to use the animal, they must come to him and ask.
He was just seeing to the last of the feed for the donkey when he perceived someone’s presence in the stable with him. Because this could have been any number of people, he did not look up from where he was tying off the feed bag until a woman’s voice he did not recognize commanded his attention.
From where he stood, inside the stall with the donkey, he was nearly entirely hidden from view. It wasn’t until he rose up that he spied the figure that he could not immediately identify. He squinted his dark eyes at her but widened them again when she introduced who she was. “Ah,” he answered, searching his own memory and attempting to grasp at how this woman would even come to be here and why, especially at this hour.
“Where is your husband?” he asked immediately, noting the man did not appear to be with her. Without drawing closer to her, he gave her his full attention as he rested just the tips of his fingers on the stall’s edge.
His squint only narrowed as she explained that her husband had not asked her to come and that she’d done this on her own. This was already a strike against her and, by extension, her husband. Though, Amiti prided himself on being a fair man and decided internally to hear what she had come to say before sending her away completely.
“I will hear you,” he said carefully. “But I warn you now that I do not pass a kind eye on what he is attempting to stir up among the people and neither does my father.” Amiti, to be completely truthful, hadn’t heard all of it. One of the men he’d been walking with yesterday was the one much more familiar and had pushed him to speak to Gilit and demand he quit making trouble. Trusting his friend more than the stranger, Amiti had done exactly that. He’d heard enough to convince him that while not wrong, exactly, this was definitely calling for more than a normal Judean was prepared to give toward a cause.
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In the mornings, before the sun blazed onto the horizon, when the world was calm and quiet was when Amiti liked to wake. He laid in his bed for just a moment, eyes glittering in the low gray light, and looked toward his window. Today was nothing in particular. There was nowhere pressing that he had to be, though of course he would go to the temple. Sitting up, he swung his legs out of bed and then lowered himself to his knees. He bowed his head and murmured his prayers, facing the direction of the temple in Jerusalem as he did it. Once done, he stood, washed his face and hands, and dressed for the day.
He took care with his nails, ensuring there was no dirt, that the lengths were even, and that his general appearance was above reproach. With careful, methodical strokes, he brushed his beard and his hair before checking himself one last time in the looking glass. None of this was vanity - at least, not in the sense that he found himself to be some sort of adonis for people to admire. No, he wanted to make sure that when judgemental glances were shot his way, he would be impenetrable.
The kitchen servant was awake and beginning the task of preparing food for the household, but it would not be ready for an hour or two yet. Usually he went to his study to read but this morning he was stopped and told that the servant responsible for taking care of the animals was ill. Being particular about the way his donkey was dealt with, Amiti elected to take care of the chore himself. He was not too good, after all, to do it.
This sort of thing kept a person humble.
He nodded to the servant who’d informed him of the ill man and thought for a moment. Though the son of Tzephaniah had faults enough, he was not a cruel man. The doctor would be summoned for the servant and he decided to be the one to do it, though, that meant he needed to go and see how bad the illness was. This would also tell him how contagious.
A brief look confirmed that the man did need a doctor but beyond that was out of Amiti’s scope of knowledge. The problem was that his donkey needed to be cared for first. Obviously he could dispense with brushing the coat for now, but not food and water. That task must be done.
He sighed to himself and then headed out to the stables. They were not the wealthiest men in the city but they certainly weren’t poor. In the stables outside his home, they were able to house and feed three donkies that had to be shared between the brothers and their father. Amiti had gone to the trouble to secure his own, which meant that if any of the other men in the house wanted to use the animal, they must come to him and ask.
He was just seeing to the last of the feed for the donkey when he perceived someone’s presence in the stable with him. Because this could have been any number of people, he did not look up from where he was tying off the feed bag until a woman’s voice he did not recognize commanded his attention.
From where he stood, inside the stall with the donkey, he was nearly entirely hidden from view. It wasn’t until he rose up that he spied the figure that he could not immediately identify. He squinted his dark eyes at her but widened them again when she introduced who she was. “Ah,” he answered, searching his own memory and attempting to grasp at how this woman would even come to be here and why, especially at this hour.
“Where is your husband?” he asked immediately, noting the man did not appear to be with her. Without drawing closer to her, he gave her his full attention as he rested just the tips of his fingers on the stall’s edge.
His squint only narrowed as she explained that her husband had not asked her to come and that she’d done this on her own. This was already a strike against her and, by extension, her husband. Though, Amiti prided himself on being a fair man and decided internally to hear what she had come to say before sending her away completely.
“I will hear you,” he said carefully. “But I warn you now that I do not pass a kind eye on what he is attempting to stir up among the people and neither does my father.” Amiti, to be completely truthful, hadn’t heard all of it. One of the men he’d been walking with yesterday was the one much more familiar and had pushed him to speak to Gilit and demand he quit making trouble. Trusting his friend more than the stranger, Amiti had done exactly that. He’d heard enough to convince him that while not wrong, exactly, this was definitely calling for more than a normal Judean was prepared to give toward a cause.
In the mornings, before the sun blazed onto the horizon, when the world was calm and quiet was when Amiti liked to wake. He laid in his bed for just a moment, eyes glittering in the low gray light, and looked toward his window. Today was nothing in particular. There was nowhere pressing that he had to be, though of course he would go to the temple. Sitting up, he swung his legs out of bed and then lowered himself to his knees. He bowed his head and murmured his prayers, facing the direction of the temple in Jerusalem as he did it. Once done, he stood, washed his face and hands, and dressed for the day.
He took care with his nails, ensuring there was no dirt, that the lengths were even, and that his general appearance was above reproach. With careful, methodical strokes, he brushed his beard and his hair before checking himself one last time in the looking glass. None of this was vanity - at least, not in the sense that he found himself to be some sort of adonis for people to admire. No, he wanted to make sure that when judgemental glances were shot his way, he would be impenetrable.
The kitchen servant was awake and beginning the task of preparing food for the household, but it would not be ready for an hour or two yet. Usually he went to his study to read but this morning he was stopped and told that the servant responsible for taking care of the animals was ill. Being particular about the way his donkey was dealt with, Amiti elected to take care of the chore himself. He was not too good, after all, to do it.
This sort of thing kept a person humble.
He nodded to the servant who’d informed him of the ill man and thought for a moment. Though the son of Tzephaniah had faults enough, he was not a cruel man. The doctor would be summoned for the servant and he decided to be the one to do it, though, that meant he needed to go and see how bad the illness was. This would also tell him how contagious.
A brief look confirmed that the man did need a doctor but beyond that was out of Amiti’s scope of knowledge. The problem was that his donkey needed to be cared for first. Obviously he could dispense with brushing the coat for now, but not food and water. That task must be done.
He sighed to himself and then headed out to the stables. They were not the wealthiest men in the city but they certainly weren’t poor. In the stables outside his home, they were able to house and feed three donkies that had to be shared between the brothers and their father. Amiti had gone to the trouble to secure his own, which meant that if any of the other men in the house wanted to use the animal, they must come to him and ask.
He was just seeing to the last of the feed for the donkey when he perceived someone’s presence in the stable with him. Because this could have been any number of people, he did not look up from where he was tying off the feed bag until a woman’s voice he did not recognize commanded his attention.
From where he stood, inside the stall with the donkey, he was nearly entirely hidden from view. It wasn’t until he rose up that he spied the figure that he could not immediately identify. He squinted his dark eyes at her but widened them again when she introduced who she was. “Ah,” he answered, searching his own memory and attempting to grasp at how this woman would even come to be here and why, especially at this hour.
“Where is your husband?” he asked immediately, noting the man did not appear to be with her. Without drawing closer to her, he gave her his full attention as he rested just the tips of his fingers on the stall’s edge.
His squint only narrowed as she explained that her husband had not asked her to come and that she’d done this on her own. This was already a strike against her and, by extension, her husband. Though, Amiti prided himself on being a fair man and decided internally to hear what she had come to say before sending her away completely.
“I will hear you,” he said carefully. “But I warn you now that I do not pass a kind eye on what he is attempting to stir up among the people and neither does my father.” Amiti, to be completely truthful, hadn’t heard all of it. One of the men he’d been walking with yesterday was the one much more familiar and had pushed him to speak to Gilit and demand he quit making trouble. Trusting his friend more than the stranger, Amiti had done exactly that. He’d heard enough to convince him that while not wrong, exactly, this was definitely calling for more than a normal Judean was prepared to give toward a cause.
Her presumption exceeded her precautions, it seemed. Visha swallowed and bowed her head in place of wincing at the Senator's grave expression and closed posture as he turned to face her. His cold, narrow eyes seemed to weigh and measure her from so many hundreds of cubits above-- his expression, taut as a bowstring over his bones, reminded her so of the priests who turned Gilit away in every city they travelled. Nevertheless, her husband yearned to have this man respect him, and so Visha would pay deference to that Gilit's faith. She would pour her heart into yielding up the best of them to this senator's scrutiny. If he could not accept their best, then that was between himself and their God.
One thing was true. At one, curt bark Amiti drove them straight to the heart of the matter. He did not look kindly on her husband's acquaintances and their scheming. She nodded, as much to acknowledge his honesty with gratitude as to sympathize with his frustrations. There was often something puerile about the way the young priests and the men of influence that Gilit tried to find company with, the way they would bend low to one another's ears and whinge about every little decree their elders made without ever venturing an alternative, as Gilit and other work-minded people were apt to. Visha frequently bit her tongue in their company. The urge to knock their heads together as though they were shepherd boys brandishing crooks or shears at one another had nearly overcome her more than once. Yet.
'I acknowledge that my husband has a loose tongue, sir.' Gilit was the kind of man who sat in the midst of a gaggle of disgruntled scribes, priests, and merchants and memorized what each of them argued for as faithfully as though they were a cherub at the seat of an altar. He would rise when the din died down, raising his hands in a pacifying gesture and offering his own rebuttal. In some cities he was shouted back down and cowed into apology. In one or two cities people cleaved to him and sought the insight he nursed in his aching head all the while that he and Visha travelled. But Gilit was a man who never lied by omission. If asked about what the people of this or that city had said, he would relay even the most incendiary of opinions, and he would stubbornly insist that the arguments he offered in opposition should do enough to keep them from spreading. He knew this was what truly earned him invitations to minor officials' tables, to this or that party, to tables overflowing with riches he couldn't partake of, but could certainly bask in. No one cared about a merchant's clear-eyed vision.
Visha doesn't move closer. She holds her ground, but her chin lifts again as though by habit as her back straightens out. 'And if you could have an honest conversation with him, you would find that he has strong opinions about the ways in which Judean leadership should limit land ownership and cultural activity foreigners engage in here. You would find he has even stronger opinions about what the religious leadership could do to better unify Judeans in their faith in our traditions rather than blaming foreigners. That is why he finds himself in the company of those you cannot look kindly on.'
Her gaze crossed his directly for an instant before she remembered to lower her boring pupils respectfully. 'But I would submit to you that as a merchant he has tremendous respect for how hard you find it to handle conflicts between different people and needs in your territory, and he is not someone who stands against your authority. He trusts you, and if you told him what he could expect from you, he would do everything he could to tame the backbiters of this city into trying to improve upon your efforts instead of defeating them. I came here to tell you what he will not do, so that you can trust him when he tells you how he is at your service. My husband is not a liar, sir. He only fears to assert himself.'
She sucked in a breath. 'I speak with his voice, and not a woman's sir, as have many women sent to intercede for their fathers, brothers, and husbands in our traditions. Will you listen?'
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Her presumption exceeded her precautions, it seemed. Visha swallowed and bowed her head in place of wincing at the Senator's grave expression and closed posture as he turned to face her. His cold, narrow eyes seemed to weigh and measure her from so many hundreds of cubits above-- his expression, taut as a bowstring over his bones, reminded her so of the priests who turned Gilit away in every city they travelled. Nevertheless, her husband yearned to have this man respect him, and so Visha would pay deference to that Gilit's faith. She would pour her heart into yielding up the best of them to this senator's scrutiny. If he could not accept their best, then that was between himself and their God.
One thing was true. At one, curt bark Amiti drove them straight to the heart of the matter. He did not look kindly on her husband's acquaintances and their scheming. She nodded, as much to acknowledge his honesty with gratitude as to sympathize with his frustrations. There was often something puerile about the way the young priests and the men of influence that Gilit tried to find company with, the way they would bend low to one another's ears and whinge about every little decree their elders made without ever venturing an alternative, as Gilit and other work-minded people were apt to. Visha frequently bit her tongue in their company. The urge to knock their heads together as though they were shepherd boys brandishing crooks or shears at one another had nearly overcome her more than once. Yet.
'I acknowledge that my husband has a loose tongue, sir.' Gilit was the kind of man who sat in the midst of a gaggle of disgruntled scribes, priests, and merchants and memorized what each of them argued for as faithfully as though they were a cherub at the seat of an altar. He would rise when the din died down, raising his hands in a pacifying gesture and offering his own rebuttal. In some cities he was shouted back down and cowed into apology. In one or two cities people cleaved to him and sought the insight he nursed in his aching head all the while that he and Visha travelled. But Gilit was a man who never lied by omission. If asked about what the people of this or that city had said, he would relay even the most incendiary of opinions, and he would stubbornly insist that the arguments he offered in opposition should do enough to keep them from spreading. He knew this was what truly earned him invitations to minor officials' tables, to this or that party, to tables overflowing with riches he couldn't partake of, but could certainly bask in. No one cared about a merchant's clear-eyed vision.
Visha doesn't move closer. She holds her ground, but her chin lifts again as though by habit as her back straightens out. 'And if you could have an honest conversation with him, you would find that he has strong opinions about the ways in which Judean leadership should limit land ownership and cultural activity foreigners engage in here. You would find he has even stronger opinions about what the religious leadership could do to better unify Judeans in their faith in our traditions rather than blaming foreigners. That is why he finds himself in the company of those you cannot look kindly on.'
Her gaze crossed his directly for an instant before she remembered to lower her boring pupils respectfully. 'But I would submit to you that as a merchant he has tremendous respect for how hard you find it to handle conflicts between different people and needs in your territory, and he is not someone who stands against your authority. He trusts you, and if you told him what he could expect from you, he would do everything he could to tame the backbiters of this city into trying to improve upon your efforts instead of defeating them. I came here to tell you what he will not do, so that you can trust him when he tells you how he is at your service. My husband is not a liar, sir. He only fears to assert himself.'
She sucked in a breath. 'I speak with his voice, and not a woman's sir, as have many women sent to intercede for their fathers, brothers, and husbands in our traditions. Will you listen?'
Her presumption exceeded her precautions, it seemed. Visha swallowed and bowed her head in place of wincing at the Senator's grave expression and closed posture as he turned to face her. His cold, narrow eyes seemed to weigh and measure her from so many hundreds of cubits above-- his expression, taut as a bowstring over his bones, reminded her so of the priests who turned Gilit away in every city they travelled. Nevertheless, her husband yearned to have this man respect him, and so Visha would pay deference to that Gilit's faith. She would pour her heart into yielding up the best of them to this senator's scrutiny. If he could not accept their best, then that was between himself and their God.
One thing was true. At one, curt bark Amiti drove them straight to the heart of the matter. He did not look kindly on her husband's acquaintances and their scheming. She nodded, as much to acknowledge his honesty with gratitude as to sympathize with his frustrations. There was often something puerile about the way the young priests and the men of influence that Gilit tried to find company with, the way they would bend low to one another's ears and whinge about every little decree their elders made without ever venturing an alternative, as Gilit and other work-minded people were apt to. Visha frequently bit her tongue in their company. The urge to knock their heads together as though they were shepherd boys brandishing crooks or shears at one another had nearly overcome her more than once. Yet.
'I acknowledge that my husband has a loose tongue, sir.' Gilit was the kind of man who sat in the midst of a gaggle of disgruntled scribes, priests, and merchants and memorized what each of them argued for as faithfully as though they were a cherub at the seat of an altar. He would rise when the din died down, raising his hands in a pacifying gesture and offering his own rebuttal. In some cities he was shouted back down and cowed into apology. In one or two cities people cleaved to him and sought the insight he nursed in his aching head all the while that he and Visha travelled. But Gilit was a man who never lied by omission. If asked about what the people of this or that city had said, he would relay even the most incendiary of opinions, and he would stubbornly insist that the arguments he offered in opposition should do enough to keep them from spreading. He knew this was what truly earned him invitations to minor officials' tables, to this or that party, to tables overflowing with riches he couldn't partake of, but could certainly bask in. No one cared about a merchant's clear-eyed vision.
Visha doesn't move closer. She holds her ground, but her chin lifts again as though by habit as her back straightens out. 'And if you could have an honest conversation with him, you would find that he has strong opinions about the ways in which Judean leadership should limit land ownership and cultural activity foreigners engage in here. You would find he has even stronger opinions about what the religious leadership could do to better unify Judeans in their faith in our traditions rather than blaming foreigners. That is why he finds himself in the company of those you cannot look kindly on.'
Her gaze crossed his directly for an instant before she remembered to lower her boring pupils respectfully. 'But I would submit to you that as a merchant he has tremendous respect for how hard you find it to handle conflicts between different people and needs in your territory, and he is not someone who stands against your authority. He trusts you, and if you told him what he could expect from you, he would do everything he could to tame the backbiters of this city into trying to improve upon your efforts instead of defeating them. I came here to tell you what he will not do, so that you can trust him when he tells you how he is at your service. My husband is not a liar, sir. He only fears to assert himself.'
She sucked in a breath. 'I speak with his voice, and not a woman's sir, as have many women sent to intercede for their fathers, brothers, and husbands in our traditions. Will you listen?'
“A loose tongue is the sign of a man who has very little self control,” Amiti commented. Not to mention that her husband was infirmed. That, alone, spoke volumes. Yahweh was clearly not with this man. Not while he spouted words of discord and strife throughout the land. And with a woman as his speaker? It had happened before, in ancient times, when there seemed to be no men to speak, but that was not the case in the here and now, and this woman was not claiming to be a prophetess. Only the mouthpiece of her deranged husband.
The defiant tilt to her chin did not help her cause. Not only did he not like the trait to begin with, he especially did not like it in this form. To him, Avishag was every bit as guilty as her husband for causing the uproar. Perhaps, if she had been home, or simply with her husband - aiding him as he needed or demanded, that would be different. But no. She was here at her husband’s command, and, if her expression and body language were anything to go by, she believed in the cause just as much. Or at least her husband; that amounted to the same thing.
With the plea for an honest conversation, he tensed, his jaw tightening but he did not interrupt while she spoke. However, the more she spoke, the more convinced he became of his friend’s concern: Gilit and his wife were trouble.
All while she spoke, the donkey behind them ground oats between its flat teeth and watched in disinterest as she presented her case, and as Amiti drew in breath to put her in her place.
“Are you suggesting, that if I were mad enough to invite your overzealous husband into my home, that the conversation he would have with me would not be honest?” Never mind that he was perfectly aware that there were men in power who never spoke an honest word in their lives. Still, the implication that he or his family were among those sorts of people rankled him. Everything out of her mouth suggested that Gilit, and her, to a certain extent, felt that the House of Jaffe did not have Damascus firmly in hand.
“I will not listen,” he turned his back on her and went to attend his donkey, readying it for the trip. “Not now, certainly. My servant is ill.” He had already been too generous with his time in giving this woman an audience.
“Hear this, Avishag of Gilit. Your husband does not sound like a well man, or a sane one. Pray for him.” He opened the donkey’s stall and made to move past her with the animal in tow. Honestly. This woman. He left her to stand there, attempting to get him to bend to her husband's terrible ways. He would not.
That was all that was said on the matter. Amiti went on his way and when he came back with the doctor for his servant, Avishag was gone.
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“A loose tongue is the sign of a man who has very little self control,” Amiti commented. Not to mention that her husband was infirmed. That, alone, spoke volumes. Yahweh was clearly not with this man. Not while he spouted words of discord and strife throughout the land. And with a woman as his speaker? It had happened before, in ancient times, when there seemed to be no men to speak, but that was not the case in the here and now, and this woman was not claiming to be a prophetess. Only the mouthpiece of her deranged husband.
The defiant tilt to her chin did not help her cause. Not only did he not like the trait to begin with, he especially did not like it in this form. To him, Avishag was every bit as guilty as her husband for causing the uproar. Perhaps, if she had been home, or simply with her husband - aiding him as he needed or demanded, that would be different. But no. She was here at her husband’s command, and, if her expression and body language were anything to go by, she believed in the cause just as much. Or at least her husband; that amounted to the same thing.
With the plea for an honest conversation, he tensed, his jaw tightening but he did not interrupt while she spoke. However, the more she spoke, the more convinced he became of his friend’s concern: Gilit and his wife were trouble.
All while she spoke, the donkey behind them ground oats between its flat teeth and watched in disinterest as she presented her case, and as Amiti drew in breath to put her in her place.
“Are you suggesting, that if I were mad enough to invite your overzealous husband into my home, that the conversation he would have with me would not be honest?” Never mind that he was perfectly aware that there were men in power who never spoke an honest word in their lives. Still, the implication that he or his family were among those sorts of people rankled him. Everything out of her mouth suggested that Gilit, and her, to a certain extent, felt that the House of Jaffe did not have Damascus firmly in hand.
“I will not listen,” he turned his back on her and went to attend his donkey, readying it for the trip. “Not now, certainly. My servant is ill.” He had already been too generous with his time in giving this woman an audience.
“Hear this, Avishag of Gilit. Your husband does not sound like a well man, or a sane one. Pray for him.” He opened the donkey’s stall and made to move past her with the animal in tow. Honestly. This woman. He left her to stand there, attempting to get him to bend to her husband's terrible ways. He would not.
That was all that was said on the matter. Amiti went on his way and when he came back with the doctor for his servant, Avishag was gone.
“A loose tongue is the sign of a man who has very little self control,” Amiti commented. Not to mention that her husband was infirmed. That, alone, spoke volumes. Yahweh was clearly not with this man. Not while he spouted words of discord and strife throughout the land. And with a woman as his speaker? It had happened before, in ancient times, when there seemed to be no men to speak, but that was not the case in the here and now, and this woman was not claiming to be a prophetess. Only the mouthpiece of her deranged husband.
The defiant tilt to her chin did not help her cause. Not only did he not like the trait to begin with, he especially did not like it in this form. To him, Avishag was every bit as guilty as her husband for causing the uproar. Perhaps, if she had been home, or simply with her husband - aiding him as he needed or demanded, that would be different. But no. She was here at her husband’s command, and, if her expression and body language were anything to go by, she believed in the cause just as much. Or at least her husband; that amounted to the same thing.
With the plea for an honest conversation, he tensed, his jaw tightening but he did not interrupt while she spoke. However, the more she spoke, the more convinced he became of his friend’s concern: Gilit and his wife were trouble.
All while she spoke, the donkey behind them ground oats between its flat teeth and watched in disinterest as she presented her case, and as Amiti drew in breath to put her in her place.
“Are you suggesting, that if I were mad enough to invite your overzealous husband into my home, that the conversation he would have with me would not be honest?” Never mind that he was perfectly aware that there were men in power who never spoke an honest word in their lives. Still, the implication that he or his family were among those sorts of people rankled him. Everything out of her mouth suggested that Gilit, and her, to a certain extent, felt that the House of Jaffe did not have Damascus firmly in hand.
“I will not listen,” he turned his back on her and went to attend his donkey, readying it for the trip. “Not now, certainly. My servant is ill.” He had already been too generous with his time in giving this woman an audience.
“Hear this, Avishag of Gilit. Your husband does not sound like a well man, or a sane one. Pray for him.” He opened the donkey’s stall and made to move past her with the animal in tow. Honestly. This woman. He left her to stand there, attempting to get him to bend to her husband's terrible ways. He would not.
That was all that was said on the matter. Amiti went on his way and when he came back with the doctor for his servant, Avishag was gone.